Jose said "lets go to the movies tonight lesly."
Lesly repied "yea baby but wat moive we going to see."
"Ok, umm and idk we can see when we get there."
"Ok but i need to go ask my mommy"
When the movie is over jose said "so how was the movie"
"umm it is was ok but you could of doen something to me"
"like"
"like huged me or kiss me or something"
"oohh next time i'l do it"
"ok so when is going to be the next time"
"mm when ever tou can go"
I think i can go next friday"
"ok i'l go pick you up around 8:30
ok i'l me waiting for you"
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This is a great start. I like how you have given your characters personality and you have done a great job of organizing your dialogue appropriately.
ReplyDeleteDon't forget to capitalize where appropriate and to put periods or end punctuation in.