Wednesday, June 17, 2009

Carlos is running in the school's hallway the ghost is running towards hem. Carlos saw the ghost it is getting closer and closer he was close to a window he jumps out of it he can fell the blood going down hes skin he can fell window parts in hes skin. he looks up to the window he sees the ghost and he to hes house. the next day when he wakes up and goes to eat hes mom saw the blood on hes arms and said "what haped to u to u,"

"noting" Carlos said

"u better not be going to that school again and if i find out you did were moving,"
"but i haven't gone to the school for a long time"

"OK, u better not go"

and days past and he wanted to go to the school again but he didn't want to move because all of hes friend lived there so in the night he was Stell up and hes mom and dad are asleep he when out to the school to see it again when he got there he was looking around looking for the ghost but he couldn't find hem so he when back home he was thinking about the ghost he said the next time he goes hes going to that a vacuum to vacuum hem up so he when again and toke the vacuum and he was vacuuming every were he can and one room that he va cuumed he saw the ghost going in the vacuum so he when back home not werred about noting because he has the ghost in the vacuum.

Tuesday, June 16, 2009


TEARS OF A TIGER


BY SHARON M. DRAPER



This book is realistic fiction

because it takes place in a real world but its made up.


This book is about this kid named TRRONE he was driving the car that crashed one night after a game, that killed robert it was hes best friend and the captain of hazewood high tigers. they been drinking but months later andy cant stop blaming himself because he was the one that was driving the car and he was drinking to and we was a good student in school but in tell that happed he dont do work he dont do noting in school no more and he goes to the docter every day but he tell blams hem self and all of this freind are helping hem because he is aa backetball player but he killed hem self beause he blamed hem self hes dadc found hem in hes room with a gun shot in hes head thats why u should raed this book.

Tuesday, June 2, 2009

story

Jose said "lets go to the movies tonight lesly."


Lesly repied "yea baby but wat moive we going to see."


"Ok, umm and idk we can see when we get there."


"Ok but i need to go ask my mommy"



When the movie is over jose said "so how was the movie"



"umm it is was ok but you could of doen something to me"



"like"



"like huged me or kiss me or something"



"oohh next time i'l do it"



"ok so when is going to be the next time"



"mm when ever tou can go"



I think i can go next friday"



"ok i'l go pick you up around 8:30



ok i'l me waiting for you"

Monday, June 1, 2009

reading response #1

My 1st book I read was in English and it was spider-man. I read it with my sister when I was little.I remember that I read the hardest word in the book.

My biggest achievement in reading was when I finished my 1st book. It was Clifford i read it in 1 day. i remember that the book was boring.